Thursday 5 November 2015

My simile poem

Tear drops 

My tears falling down like raindrops in the sight
Tears rolling down as rocks on a mountain 
Tears on my cheeks like holes in the ground 
My tears are water as ice and snow
Snow flakes and raindrop falling down as tears in the night
By Keagan

2 comments:

  1. Your poem is so visual, no imagination needed. Well done!
    Mrs S.

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  2. I love your picture. It's very pretty. Your poem is heart touching

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